15 Ways to Honor National Book Month

October is National Book Month. To honor this occasion, I am reposting this story from a couple of years ago.

For readers, authors, publishers, book sellers, and book lovers of all ages, this is an important occasion to celebrate books. It’s a month dedicated to literary pursuits, for snuggling up on the sofa with a hot beverage and burying yourself in the pages of a classic or current bestseller, no matter what genre you enjoy.

This is not to be confused with National Reading Month which takes place every March. National Book Month was formed by the National Book Foundation in 2003 to honor the best books and authors. It’s also encourages the reading books of all genres, to support others’ rights to acquire and read books, and support authors and independent bookstores. If you love books and if you love to read, this themed month is one to savor.

So how can you honor National Book Month? Here are a few suggestions that are sure to keep you busy all month – and beyond. What is your favorite way to celebrate National Book Month?

1.  Enjoy a reading retreat. Set aside an entire weekend just for indulging yourself with a good book. Turn off the TV and streaming services. Instead, immerse yourself in the written word rather than watching it on the screen.

2. Read a new author. Scan the bookshelves at the library or local bookstore and find an author you’ve never read before. Perhaps it’s someone you’ve heard good things about. Or maybe you’ve never heard of them, but the book title and premise intrigues you. When you try new authors, you open yourself up to new ways of storytelling.

3. Re-read a favorite author. Re-reading a novel from a favorite author is much like wearing an old favorite sweater that’s warm and comfy. If a lot of time has passed since the first time you read the book, you may see something new in the story that you didn’t notice before.

4. Visit an independent bookstore. Independent bookstores have seen a resurgence in recent years, thanks in part to their connections to their communities. This National Book Month, show your love of reading by visiting your favorite, local bookstore.

5. Visit your local library. For those who can’t afford to buy books, libraries are their go-to place for reading. These days, libraries are more than just a place to borrow books. You can also borrow DVD movies, audio books and music. Libraries are the ultimate literary community center of the neighborhood.

6. Join a book discussion group. There are numerous book discussion groups around and many of them specialize in a particular genre, such as mystery, current events or memoir. Check your local church, library or bookstore for one near you. If you can’t find a group that fits your interests, start one of your own.

7. Swap books with other readers. When you’re done reading a book, spare it from a life on your bookshelf collecting dust. Consider swapping books with friends, neighbor or colleagues so you all can enjoy them. Or set up a lending library in your apartment building so all residents can contribute their used books.

8. Set up a Little Free Library. Share your love of reading with your neighbors through a local Little Free Library. You’d be surprised at the types of books you might find at one, including recent bestsellers. These little libraries not only bring readers together, but they’re a great place to donate your own books you no longer want.   

9. Support local authors. Follow your favorite local authors on social media, comment on their postings, or attend an author book signing in person. Show them how much you appreciate their work. After spending long hours honing their craft or working on their novel, getting fan support often gives them a boost of confidence.  

10. Donate books. There are many non-profit organizations that collect books to pass on to people who don’t have access to them. One such organization is Chicago Books to Women in Prison, which responds to letters from women in prison and sends them books upon request from their library. Consider donating books you’ve already read so others may enjoy them too.

11. Carry a book with you wherever you go. Tuck a book in your briefcase, backpack or purse. If you’re out and about and you suddenly find yourself stuck in traffic, waiting at the dentist’s office or riding the bus, you can use the spare time to read.

12. Read a banned book. A surprising number of books are falling on the banned hit list in many areas of the country. Many of these books are banned because they are either considered sexually explicit, depict child abuse or contain LBGTQIA+ content, among other things. You can find lists of banned books on the ALA’s website as well as ways you can get involved in fighting book banning.

13. Listen to an audio book. If you can’t sit down to read, try listening to a book instead. Audio books make it possible to multi-task, so you can enjoy the latest best-seller while driving your car or cooking dinner.

14. Write a book review. Is there a book you absolutely LOVED? Or conversely, is there one that disappointed you? Write a brief review about it. Post it to your own blog (if you have one) or post on a review site like Good Reads.

National Book Month is the perfect time to express your love of books.

Writing Stories Featuring Mature Characters

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Pick up a book anywhere these days, and you’ll likely find a story about a young protagonist, or at least someone far younger than yourself. In an effort to reach the millennial generation, most publishers and filmmakers tend to feature younger characters.

Where does that leave older readers and viewers?

A recent study by Gransnet, an online community for grandparents, finds that ageism really does exist in fiction. In its survey of 1,000 women over the age of 40, roughly 47% said there aren’t enough books on the market about middle-aged or older women.

Further, over half (51%) felt older women in fiction were portrayed in clichéd roles, such as being technology-phobic (not true) or not having interests outside of the home.  

Most important, two-thirds of surveyed women (67%) said they want to read about characters they can identify with, specifically physically active women (56%) and working in satisfying careers (41%).

The publishing industry is beginning to take notice. Some publishers are more open to reviewing manuscripts featuring older adults. While the path isn’t wide open, it’s certainly an improvement from days past when publishers automatically dismissed a story because of an aged protagonist.

For examples of these types of stories, here’s a list of books I’ve read that feature older protagonists (late 40s and older).

* The Little French Bistro by Nina George
* The Little Paris Bookshop by Nina George
* The Messy Lives of Book People by Phaedra Patrick
* The Children Act by Ian McEwan
* A Man Called Ove by Frederick Bachman
* Still Alice by Lisa Genova
* Olive Kittridge by Elizabeth Strout
* The Snow Child by Eowyn Ivey
* Open House by Elizabeth Berg
 
Why do these stories work? Because they feature clearly drawn characters with extensive life experiences and some emotional baggage, which makes them relatable. Their backstories are based on modern realities, such as career shifts, love gained and lost, and personal challenges. They also bring emotional maturity. Even though they’re older, they still face difficulties, such as fear of aging, fear of being alone and struggling to trust again.

The truth is, people don’t stop living – or loving – once they turn 45.

“Older characters show us what it’s like to be human,” said Jeannie Moon, Your Author Mom, in a recent webinar for the Contemporary Romance Writers (CRW). While her session focused on romance novels, I think her suggestions can be applied to any genre or literary fiction.

Stories about characters over 45, Moon added, “focus not only on romantic relationships but also on personal journeys of growth and reinvention. Themes of second chances, overcoming life’s hardships, and rediscovering love are common, adding to the emotional resonance of these stories.”

To best capture these literary journeys, writers can adapt the traditional fiction tropes so they reflect the challenges and opportunities of middle-aged characters. For example:

* Friends to lovers – You might have the lead characters meet through a mutual friend or at a social occasion, like a wedding. Maybe they go to the same health club or share the same hobby, like bird watching, or meet at a cooking class.

* Forbidden love – Something about their budding relationship might be forbidden. The most common obstacle is age difference or perhaps they live in separate cities so the distance might prevent them from being close.

* Second chance – This trope is common for older characters. Imagine them meeting at a class reunion (I have friends who met that way and later married!) or meet at the funeral of a mutual acquaintance after not seeing each other for years.

* Rebuilding after loss – Older characters suffer through losses, but also find the strength to move forward with their lives. Losing a spouse, a job, or a home are common experiences for older adults.

* Forced proximity – Seasoned characters might have their own businesses. In this trope, try pitting two business owners against one another on opposite sides of an issue concerning their town.

You get the idea.

There’s plenty of room on library and bookstore shelves for stories about mature adults. The key is to create characters that are authentic and believable. Show them as vulnerable people struggling to make sense of their world as they grow older.

As readers age out of younger protagonist-led stories, they will appreciate being able to find novels with older characters.

Best Tips from the Writing Brave Summit             

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Recently, I attended The Writing Brave Summit, a virtual meeting hosted by Brooke Adams Law. The event featured interviews and webinars by authors, editors and publishing experts who shared insights and tips about writing. The summit covered fiction, non-fiction and memoir writing so participants could pick and choose the sessions that they were most interested in.

As a fiction writer, I walked away armed with renewed enthusiasm for my work. I’ve compiled some of the best tips I heard from these professionals and share them with you below. Hopefully, they can help you as much as they’ve helped me.

Tip 1: If your story is stuck, it may be a problem with your protagonist not the plot. It’s not about raising the temperature in the story or adding a new plot twist, said editor and book coach Daniel David Wallace. What may be needed is to raise the temperature on your protagonist. Make sure your main character is fully engaged with the action, making decisions for good or bad about what to do next. That will keep the story moving forward. Focus on developing the character first, including goals and motivation, then develop the plot.

Tip 2: Write scenes from perspective of one POV character. It’s easier to write a story when you have one Point-of-view character per scene, said Savannah Bilbo, developmental editor and book coach. When you switch POVs within a scene with no defined break, it can be confusing for the reader.

Within each scene, give the POV character a goal, something they want to achieve. That could be getting advice from a friend or gathering some key information or take care of a problem. Also make sure the POV character has agency, that they are the one dealing with the conflict and making decisions.  Without that mini-goal and decision-making role, the character isn’t realistic and can’t engage with the action of the story (which piggybacks onto my previous point.)

Tip 3: Use interiority to get into the mind and heart of the POV character. Make sure the POV character reacts internally to everything that happens in the scene, not just what they think and feel, but what they plan to do about the problem they face, said Karyn Fischer with Story and Prose. Interiority matters for several reasons:

  • It provides context for the action
  • It’s the inside story
  • It leads to character transformation.
  • It allows readers to feel the emotion
  • It allows readers to follow the logic of the POV character
  • It connects to the character’s voice

    Tip 4: Create conflict between characters by developing opposing personality traits. Writer and book coach Kat Caldwell described the Big 5 personality traits of POV characters: conscientiousness (highly vigilant vs. complacent), agreeableness (People pleaser vs. cranky curmudgeon), Extraversion (outgoing and engaging vs. reserved), neuroticism as a reaction to stress (anxious/worrier vs. laid-back); and openness to new experiences (willing to try anything new vs. fearing change of any kind)

To use the Big 5, Caldwell suggested creating a main POV character who is out of balance with one of these personality traits. Then develop a side character or secondary lead character with the opposite trait. Alternately, you can choose a different imbalance for a side character. For example, a POV character that ranks high in agreeableness and wants to please people while her best friend is more open to change and will try anything new and thus encourage the POV character to try new things.

Tip 5: Try intuitive outlining to plan your story. If you’re not a fan of plotting or using formulas to plan your story, try intuitive outlining. This is a hybrid approach that combines the power of your own innate creativity and intuition with a loose, flexible plotting structure.

Not everyone has the ability to plan their story from scene A to scene B to scene C. Maybe you think of individual scenes but you’re not sure in which order they should be presented.  That’s okay, says Lewis Jorstad, The Novel Smithy.

“Our brains have a natural way of telling stories,” he said. Over our lifetimes, our brain has acquired an  innate sense of storytelling because it’s been exposed to different stories over the years—through books, movies, TV shows, verbal exchanges, author readings, blogs and social media, podcasts, etc. We’ve all learned how to tell stories. We just may not understand how to put them together.  

In intuitive outlining, the focus is on developing scenes as you think of them rather than developing them to fit some kind of pre-ordained formula. You let your intuition guide you.

That leads into Tip 6.

Tip 6: Think and write scenes rather than chapters. Scenes are where the action takes place while chapters are merely arbitrary breaks in the story and can sometimes contain more than one scene, which can make it difficult to work with and reorganize.

Because scenes are smaller, self-contained pieces, that makes them easier to write. They’re like puzzle pieces that can be mixed and matched and moved around. Jorstad suggests writing scenes as you think of them, then arranging them in the order they might appear in your story. Then if you see gaps in the story’s action, write additional scenes as needed, but not to complete some arbitrary formula.

Do any of these tips resonate with you? Have you learned any cool writing techniques that have helped transform your writing?

The Great Debate: Should You Call Yourself a Freelancer When Marketing Yourself?

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I came across an interesting debate on LinkedIn recently. Noted freelance writer Kat Boogaard posed this question to her followers: To be successful, should you call yourself a freelancer?

The question received a great number of comments, many from people who proudly call themselves freelancers, including Boogaard herself. A few claimed that there’s a lingering stigma attached to the title and clients either perceive you as cheap labor, a beginner or are an unreliable profession that can produce good quality work. Much of that is untrue.

Some responses surprised me. I figured I’d see more comments from people who preferred another title, such as business owner or writing consultant. But largely, most of the commenters were proud to call themselves a freelancer.

The conversation reminded me of a colleague I overheard at a networking event many years ago, who bemoaned her fate as a freelancer. I remember hearing her tell another colleague, “Why is it that when I tell someone that I’m a freelancer that they assume my services are free?”

I’d like to believe that we’ve come a long way since that overheard conversation and that today’s clients are more accepting of the freelance term. After all, as one of Boogaard’s commenters point out, freelance is the nature of the relationship they have with clients; it’s not the nature of the work itself. 

That’s an important distinction to remember. Freelancing is simply the way you choose to work. It does not reflect the type of work we do.

So this begs the question: should you include the term freelance in your title when you market yourself to potential clients? Does it make a difference at how they perceive you? Does it make a difference in the types of clients who approach you or the type of assignments you’re offered?

Like any other issue, that all depends on who you ask. I’ve broken down the arguments below.

I proudly call myself a freelance professional because….
 
* It’s how I market myself to clients. It makes it clear who I am professionally, the work I do (such as writing or graphic design) and how I work for them. I proudly own the label and the narrative of a freelancer, and there’s no doubt about what I expect from clients in return.

* Freelance is a term that editors use when searching for writing support. If an editor searches for a freelance writer, and I don’t have that term in my LinkedIn profile somewhere, they’re probably not going to find me.

* The freelance term makes it clear that I am an independent contractor. I am willing to work WITH clients, but not FOR them. It makes it clear that I cannot be treated as an employee of their firm.

* The freelancer term has become more accepted in the marketplace. Many writers have been in the freelance writing business for decades, and have worked successfully under that title. More companies are noting their professionalism, their reliability and their high-quality production. Over time, any  skepticism about freelancers has faded.

I don’t call myself a freelancer because …

* Freelancing can be perceived as a vague term that covers a lot of ground in the creative field. It doesn’t always explain the work you do or how much experience you have. For instance, a freelancer could have two years of business experience or 20. That experience difference can matter a lot to potential clients. It might be better to emphasize the type of writing or creative work you do first before identifying yourself as a freelancer.

* It can imply that you will work low-paying gigs or for free, and thereby attract clients who expect freelancers to do a lot of work for not a lot of money. It can suggest, often unfairly, that a freelancer is a starving artist who will do anything to get published. As more freelancers have hit the marketplace and turned down the low-paying jobs, those assumptions have faded. Still, there’s a certain mindset, especially among small businesses, that they can take advantage of your “free”lancing.

* The term freelancer sounds impermanent and temporary, like the title of “interim manager” in sports. It can imply that the freelancer is there for a short time to hold down the fort while those in charge look for a better qualified candidate for the job you’re already doing. It can also suggest that you’re doing this work short term until you find a better opportunity. In other words, you’re there to collect a check rather than build a long, steady relationship with the client.

As you can see, there are solid reasons on either side. Much of it depends on your comfort level with the term. I recently changed my profile description to include freelance to test out the theory that editors might find me. We’ll see…..

If you find yourself in the middle of this debate, unsure whether to call yourself a freelancer or something else, here are a few questions to ask of yourself.

* What impression do you want to make to potential clients? How do you want them to see you professionally?
* How comfortable do you feel calling yourself a freelancer?
* How do you want clients to find you (via LinkedIn, X, Instagram, other job sites)?
* How do you see yourself? As a business owner? A consultant? A writer and editor? A freelancer?
* How concerned are you about misperceptions in the marketplace?
* How much experience do you have? Are you starting out as a freelancer or have you been working that way for a while?

It takes some serious soul-searching and experimentation with assorted titles to see which one works best for you. No matter how you define yourself as a professional writer, the freelancing business is definitely thriving and is here to stay. There’s plenty of room for new faces in the freelancing pool.

Learn to Trust Your Creative Instincts

Instinct = natural intuitive power
Dictionary.com

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When I write for my business clients, I usually receive a writing sheet outlining the topic, sources to interview, deadlines, and any background information that can help me develop the story.

When I write fiction, I have no such writing sheet. I usually have to create my own guide about what the finished product will look like. That’s not necessarily a bad thing as long as I have a clear picture in my head. If my end product shows up as a fuzzy, murky picture, then I’m in trouble.

As much as I try to be organized and plan what I want to write, I find the best laid plans often go awry when a new character or plot twist I haven’t thought of shows up while I’m writing. I’m more of an intuitive writer by nature, so I can only plot so much. The rest is up to my creative instinct.

Not everyone is in tune with that creative instinct, however. Maybe you’re one of those people who has to plan every detail of your story to the point where creative instinct is shut off. Or maybe it is there, but you don’t recognize it, even when it’s hammering you over the head with a fresh idea for a story.

What if you are aware of your creative instinct, but you don’t always trust it? How do you develop trust for your own creative instinct? That’s the question I’m tackling in this week’s post.

I learned early on to trust my creative instinct. Whenever it brings forth a new character or story idea, it turns out the character becomes a vital and interesting piece of the story, and the plot twist or story idea is more innovative than anything I could consciously think up on my own

Creative instinct shows up for me at three different times: while I’m resting and not thinking about my current project; while I’m immersed in water, such as doing dishes or showering; and while I’m writing. Creative instinct shows up like an internal voice that gently guides me along the way. At other times, it speaks with authority. It’s even been playful and teasing, like when it appears in my dreams. Its messages are positive, focusing primarily on the creative process and helping me find my writing voice.

Why does it matter that we trust our creative instinct? Because there’s power in accessing your artistic self. Trusting your instinct means trusting your power as a creative person, and it will never steer you wrong.

Instinct is tied to a lifetime of observing and interacting with the world, writes Greg Bradley, Content Director at VShift. Instinct is also tied to trust, such as that feeling you get when an idea is so good, you have to trust yourself to convince others to feel about it the way you do.

“Great ideas don’t just happen on their own—you need to fight for them,” Bradley says. “If you don’t trust it, or you don’t trust yourself to see it through, well, then your instinct should tell you it’s probably not a great idea.”

Author and book coach K.M. Weiland adds that creative instinct comes from accumulating knowledge over your lifetime.

“Creating any type of story is a very complex art form,” Weiland writes on her blog Helping Writers Become Authors. “There are so many techniques and skills involved that you have to master if you’re going to pull off the whole [thing].”

For instance, every time we read a novel or watch a movie, we’re learning about storytelling, she adds. We’re absorbing what it means to create intricate plots, interesting settings, and believable characters. Over time, you develop an innate sense of story that tells you when something feels right or if something feels off, even though you may not understand specifically what is right or wrong about it.

While you don’t want to rely exclusively on your own instinct, it’s important to keep learning and keep listening to readers’ feedback.

“Ultimately, you’re the one who makes all the decisions. So you want to be able to trust your choices when you are creating your stories and your art,” writes Weiland. So what more can you do to trust your creative instinct? Here are a few tips that have helped me.

Tip 1: Write often, every day if possible. The more you write, the more your creative instincts will kick in when you need them. They’re like muscles; you have to exercise your creativity every day for them to get stronger.

Tip #2: Calm your mind. Use meditation, yoga, tai chi, breath work—anything that will slow down your thinking and tap into your subconscious, where your creative instinct lives. Our minds can become too active, too busy with to-do lists and deadlines. We never give it a chance to rest, even at night. So take time to slow down your body, and your mind will follow.

Tip #3: Get plenty of rest and proper sleep. When you’re at rest, your creative instincts can work in the background. I really think that’s what encourages dreams, and from dreams come ideas for our stories.

Tip #4: Practice freewriting. Sit down at a desk or wherever you feel comfortable with a pen and paper. Then begin to write with whatever comes to mind. You keep writing for a set time or set number of pages. The key is not to take the pen off the paper, to not pause to rest or think of the next thing you want to write. You simply write whatever crosses your mind, even if it’s to write “This is a stupid exercise. I don’t understand why I’m doing this. Blah, blah, blah…” You get the idea. Think of freewriting as a warm up session to spark your creativity.  

Tip #5: Repeat some affirmations for yourself. There’s an old saying, “Garbage in, garbage out.” The same holds true for positive, optimistic feelings. Infuse your mind and body with positive messages, in time, those positive messages will help churn out some pretty amazing stuff. For example, try the following messages or create one of your own:

* I trust my creative instinct every time I write.
* I feel powerful when I create something new.
* I envision the best outcome for my creative process.

Tip #6: Keep learning about your craft. Writing is more experiential than anything else. It’s a culmination of everything you hear, see and experience of the world around you. Keep an open mind and trust the journey.

Most important, when you write, trust your creative instinct.

Lost Your Creative Flow? Here’s How to Find It Again–and Keep It Going

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We’ve all been there before. Staring at a blank page in a freeze, unsure where or how to start writing. Or you’ve taken a break from your writing and lost momentum in your work-in-progress. Even just starting a routine writing session can feel like a sludge through mud.

In those moments, you realize you’ve lost your creative flow and you wonder if you can ever get it back.

Call it a creative mojo or being in the zone or having a zen moment, creative flow occurs when you enter a state of total immersion, when all outside stimuli fade into the background, and all that’s left is you and your creative work. It’s that moment when you feel most productive and innovative. It’s when you become most in tune with your essence and where you feel most alive.

Like all good things, creative flow can come to a crashing halt. When that happens, you can feel lost, unsure how to get it back.  

When you lose your creative flow, think about why it’s happening. Maybe you’re feeling stressed about the project you’re working on, which can make you feel blocked and unproductive. Do you have too many distractions and interruptions in your daily routine? Then it’s time to do something about them to limit their impact on your creativity.

Whenever I lose that flowing feeling, I try one of the following techniques to find it again. While they may not work for everyone, they’re worth a try.

1. Turn off your electronic devices. Shut off the TV or radio. Close out any apps you use, and put your phone away. Just sit alone with your story idea and let your imagination work with it. Then when you’re ready, begin to write. I prefer writing longhand with a pen and paper because the ideas seem to flow more easily from my brain to my hand and onto the page.

2. Do a brief warm-up exercise. Just like singers warm up their vocal chords before a live performance or an athlete runs sprints or rides a stationary bicycle to loosen their muscles before a game, writers need to warm up their writing muscles too. Writing is a different kind of performance. The page or screen is our stage. Working with a prompt, freewriting one whole page, or writing in your journal are ways to warm up your creative muscles. Once you’re warmed up, you might find your creative energy flowing.

3. Seek a quiet, secluded place to write. To be at my best, I need a quiet place to work, to think and to create. I try to limit distractions as much as possible, though I will answer only the most urgent emails, phone calls or texts. Similarly, I remove any clutter from my desk because I believe a messy desk clutters my creative thinking. If you’re used to working in a busy coffee shop (good for you), but you’re not finding your flow, try writing in a quieter environment and limiting distractions.

4. Write in short bursts. Any people seem to believe that you need several hours to get into your creative flow. But sometimes less is more. When you know you’ve only got 20 free minutes, sometimes you can get more done in that short time than if you had an entire morning. With a longer session of two or three hours, there’s a tendency to stare at the page, take more breaks, answer messages or do research. Sometimes it can seem that you get less done in longer writing sessions because of the constant switching up of tasks. It’s easy to get restless and bored too. Start with a 20-minute session, then if you’re flowing well you can always extend your writing time.

5.  Seek support from fellow writers. Every creative person loses their flow at some point. Just ask any writer, artist or musician. They’ve all figured out how to get it back too. So ask friends and fellow writers how to get back into the creative flow. We can all learn from each other.

6. Read what you’ve written before. The writing could be from your previous session to get you caught up to date, or it could be something you published previously. Reading your work can put you in a success mindset and inspire you to keep writing. Sure, you might be tempted to make some edits in your work-in-progress, but that’s a sign that your brain is kicking into high gear. It’s revving the creative engine. When that happens, you’ll be ready to start writing.

7. Use pen and paper. I’ve mentioned this technique in Tip #1. I find writing longhand with pen and paper to be the fastest, easiest route to connecting with your creative self. When I write on a screen, I’m more tempted to stop to read what I’ve written, to make corrections or to look up some important detail on the internet—all deterrents to creative flow.

Here are a few tips from other writers:

8. From Copy Posse, identify your most creative time of day. When do you feel most productive? Is it early morning? Late afternoon? Before bedtime? We all sense when we feel our best, physically and mentally. If it’s possible for your schedule, block out that creative time of day and put it in your calendar. Then make time during those periods to take advantage of your natural creative flow.

9. From The Young Writer blog, practice self-care. That means getting enough exercise, eating right and getting proper sleep. When you feel well physically, you’re able to tap into your creative flow more quickly because it flows more naturally. You won’t have to work as hard to get it back, and you’re less likely to lose it at all.

10. Also from The Young Writer and perhaps most important of all, have fun. Avoid overthinking your writing. Simply relax and enjoy the process of creating. When it stops being fun, then you need to consider whether it’s time to stop writing (but hopefully, you won’t).

Remember creative flow is an ideal experience that we’d all like to achieve the moment we sit down to write. But truthfully, it’s not realistic to expect it to happen at a moment’s notice. Sometimes you have to work at it, and hopefully, these tips will help you.

Creative flow occurs in fits and starts; that’s the nature of it. When it comes, savor the feeling it gives you and use its energy to your advantage.

Writing Advice from Agents and Published Authors

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It’s the dog days of summer, and I’ve gotten a bit lazy. The last thing I want to do this week is research and write a new and lengthy blog post.

Still, there is so much valuable insights and advice to share about the writing process. So this week, I’ve compiled some of the best tips from literary agents and published authors as they shared with the editors of Writers Digest magazine. After all, we can all use a little bit of help, no matter where we are in the writing process.

Enjoy! And have a safe holiday weekend.

Advice from published authors:

“….. write the thing that you feel urgently compelled to write. Write the thing that you feel drawn to write, and write it in a way that only you can do it and trust your instincts.
Brandon Taylor, author, The Late Americans

“There’s no need to plan everything out beforehand. Part of the fun is setting up high stakes without knowing the outcome. This way you’ll be right there with your protagonist, struggling to come up with solutions, even as the walls close in deliciously around you.”
Julia Bartz, novelist, The Writing Retreat

“But self-doubt is incredibly valuable. If you didn’t ever doubt yourself, you’d be a psychopath. Sometimes doubt is what helps me as a writer say, ‘This isn’t working right.’”
Chuck Wendig, author, Gentle Writing Advice: How to Be a Writer Without Destroying Yourself

“One thing I value about writing and publishing is that it’s not as ageist as some other industries. It’s hard to become a movie star maybe at 50…. It [publishing] is something you can break through at any time. There is room for reinvention, whether that means emotional reinvention, new opportunity, or just room for growth.”
Steven Rowley, author, The Guncle Abroad

“…find as many writer friends as you can because these are the people who will completely, 100 percent understand how difficult it is to break into publishing…Reach out and find your community.”
Jesse Q Sutano, author, Dial A for Aunties

“Understand that your book is a product that needs to garner broad support… Make sure you have a core group of diverse test readers who will give you honest feedback. It doesn’t mean they’re always right, but if half of our test readers think the beginning of your book is slow, you probably need to revise it.”
Pamela Samuels Young, author, Anybody’s Daughter

“…when people ask me my advice about these things, I say, write a novella, write a short story. Be wild and free and be able to accept failure by your own terms before you commit to spending three or four or five years on something that might fail.”
Ian McEwan, author, Atonement

“You need to give yourself permission to be bad when you are drafting… This is where you need to embrace the suck. Let yourself be bad. It’s okay. Everybody’s first drafts are bad. My first drafts are terrible, but once you have a bad first draft down, you can fix it. You can edit it, you can polish it up….”
Kate Quinn, author, The Diamond Eye

“There are so many things you can worry about when you’re writing that are all irrelevant… The important thing is a book that you write is your book and it’s you, and you put yourself into it and don’t listen to any of the interference from anywhere else in the world.”
Lisa Jewell, author, The Night She Disappeared

“I’m a big believer in being in a workshop or class, working with other writers, which is not to say to just take anybody’s advice. When you’re in a classroom or a seminar, it makes you write because you know you’re going to go there Thursday. It kind of forces you to do the work.”
Alice Hoffman, author, Practical Magic

“But the thing I always say to writers is that you never should forget the lame that made you want to write this. It is better to have a strangely proportioned beast that burns and is alive and stalks across the page than a perfection proportioned corpse on the page. That is what you run into the danger of. It’s possible from too much feedback [and] too much confusion that you wind up taking out whatever is at the heart of your work.”
Jean Kwok, author, Girl in Translation

“Find a way to make your writing process a discipline in the way that musicians practice their instrument.”
Tommy Orange, author, There There

“Characters live in the moments of quiet we often rush to yell over, so take some time to let them be heard.”
Mazey Eddings, author, A Brush with Love

“If you want to make a living as a writer, approach it like a business from the start. You wouldn’t open a corner store without a business plan—don’t just wing it for your author business!”
Jessie Kwak, author, Ghost Pirate Gambit

“The biggest thing is to read a lot so you can innately understand story structure. This even comes from watching movies and TV, and thinking about why it was great and what points did it hit and what aspects of it resonated with you….”
Alyssa Cole, author, One of Us Knows

Advice from literary agents:

“Share your work with multiple readers. Consider their feedback, especially their questions. Heed only the advice that resonates. Save a few readers for subsequent drafts so they can have fresh eyes to catch anything you or your regular readers might miss.”
Jennifer March Soloway, Andrea Brown Literary Agency

“As an agent, I want to fall under your spell. I want to read past my bedtime, be haunted by your work, be captivated, lifted, [and] spirited away by your story. If your work can deliver this magic, it makes me envision all of the opportunities we can conjure together to make the ultimate connection to the readers.”
Rachel Letofsky, CookeMcDermid Agnecy

“Remember you are interviewing the agent as much as (if not more than) they ae interviewing you. Bring a list of questions and don’t be afraid to ask tough ones.”
Kesia Lupo, The Bindery Agency.

“A rejection does not mean that your writing sucks. It simply means it’s not a good fit for that particular agent. You need to find your match, someone who clicks with your book in a unique way that’s not unlike dating.”
Rachel Beck, Liza Dawson Associates

“Know what kind of writer you are: a sprinter or a marathoner, and let yourself be that kind of writer. Don’t be afraid you’ll forget your great idea. If it’s a great idea, it’ll stick to your ribs no matter how much you try to shake it off.”
Liz Parker, Verve Talent and Literary

“The key to success is being delusional enough to think that what you write is necessary, but humble enough to listen to informed feedback.”
Michael W. Bourret, Dystel, Goderich & Bourret, LLC

“Remember that ideas are cheap! You are more than one project, and there is inspiration everywhere if you look for it.”
Molly Ketcheson, Wolfson Literary Agency

“Being able to say what your novel is about in one or two sentences really helps. It’s not a question about what ‘happens’ in a novel, but it’s a question about what the heart of the novel is.”
Catherine Cho, Paper Literary

“Writing should be fun. If you’re getting to a place where it’s not anymore, take a break and let yourself fall in love with your writing again.”
Saffron Dodd, Ash Literary

Cultivating the Power of Observation for Better Character Development

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I remember back when I was in college, I took a speech class my freshman year. It was one of my favorite classes, and I loved our teacher (though I forget her name now).

One morning early in the semester, the lecture was interrupted by a former student who rushed into the classroom in a rage. He got in the teacher’s face, wanting to know why she had given him a bad grade the previous semester. She did her best to calm him down. As she escorted him from the room, she promised to discuss the issue with him after class.

My classmates and I witnessed this brief and intense exchange with a mixture of curiosity and puzzlement. We didn’t know what to make of it.

Once the former student left the room, our instructor asked us to take out a piece of paper and pen (this was way before computers) . She proceeded to ask a series of questions: What color was the student’s shirt? What was his hair color? How tall was he? Was he wearing a hat? What kind of shoes was he wearing?

There were only about 10 questions, but her intention became clear. Were we paying attention to the details? Her point? In a crisis or when witnessing a dramatic event, like a public argument, most people focus on the words that are said and how they’re spoken rather than the finer details of someone’s appearance.

People love watching other people and the events in their lives, from a car crash to a heated argument between people. We can’t help but be sucked into the drama. But that doesn’t necessarily mean they’re very good at recalling details. Yet in writing and in life, it’s a valuable skill. Those powers of observation can be useful when you’re a witness to a crime or simply people watching at the beach. You never know when you might need to relay those details, whether for a police investigation or for writing a mystery or memoir.  

This practice is also helpful for writers when developing their characters from the inside out. It’s not just the physical characteristics to be aware of, but also their facial expressions and gestures, the way they move and their mindset and attitude. It can help you form the foundation of each character’s personality.  

When quietly observing people, there are six areas to focus on. Each one can help you develop multi-dimensional characters.

Physical attributes. This might be the easiest to make a note of when observing people, though not always. Pay attention to the basics. If you see someone interesting on the street, note things like height, weight, hair color, skin tone, eye color, whether they’re wearing eyeglasses or sunglasses. Do they have thick, bushy eyebrows, or are they plucked thin? Does the woman wear lipstick, and if so, what color?

Think about how your own characters might appear if another person was observing them. Think also about how their physical attributes can define who they are as characters.

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Clothing. Next, pay attention to how your observed subjects are dressed. Are they wearing a suit and tie or a dress, or more casually in jeans and a T-shirt? One indicates someone heading to a business meeting or a formal dinner, while the second person might be a student or someone going out to a movie. What kind of shoes are they wearing? Are they spiky high heels or casual flats? Do they wear glasses or contacts? Are they wearing a windbreaker or sweater? Is there head covered?

Think about how your own characters are dressed. Does their dress show who they are or what they do for a living? If your character loves music or attending concerts, for example, have them wear concert T-shirts of their favorite band. Are they an athlete? Have them wear athletic shoes and a baseball cap.  

Nonverbal cues. Think about facial expressions and hand gestures. When you observe people, do their eyebrows rise up on their forehead when they’re surprised? Do they talk with their hands, or do they lay still at their sides when they speak? Do they smile a lot, and does that smile reach their eyes? What do their hands look like? Are they rough and callused because they work outdoors, or are they smooth and polished as if they’ve never lifted a finger to do housework? Do they have other types of body behaviors, like constant blinking, twirling their hair, pursing their lips? These small movements can give you an idea about a character’s mindset in your own stories.

Body language and movement. When you study your subject, look at how they move their body. Are they seated or standing? Are they seated upright in rapt attention, or are they slouched or hunched over at their desk? Are they sitting back against their chair, or leaning forward as if to hear every word their companion is saying? Are their movements swift, or slow and careful? Do they limp, or walk slowly and gingerly as if their limbs ache? Or are they racing ahead as if they’re running late? You can tell a lot about a person’s age, health and mindset by paying attention to their body movements. Sometimes it says more about what’s on their minds than the words they say.

Behavior alone vs. with other people. People tend to behave differently when they’re alone than when they’re around other people. For example, at first glance, a young woman traveling alone with a furrowed brow might be worried about something in her personal life, like a doctor appointment or an exam at school. But the same young woman out to dinner with friends may be livelier and more engaged.

Similarly, people behave differently around different groups of people. A child might be quieter, more sullen at home around his overbearing parents, while at school he’s more animated around his classmates. When writing your characters, think about how they behave in different situations. Who are they with and how do they behave around those people? How do they behave when they’re alone?

Possessions/accessories. When you observe people, take note of any unusual possessions or accessories they have with them. Do they carry a briefcase, a purse, a shopping bag or a backpack? Any one of those things can tell you something about your character. Someone with a backpack could be going to a job, school, or the library. Are they carrying books inside that backpack, the manuscript they’re working on, or sheet music? Are they staring into their mobile phones as they walk down the street? Are they listening to music on headphones? What do the headphones look like, and what kind of music do you think they’re listening to? Are they wearing any jewelry? Are they checking their wristwatch? They might be running late for a meeting. Are they walking a dog? Perhaps they’re carrying a pet carrier with a small bird or cat inside. A person’s accessories can tell a lot about a person’s career, hobbies and interests. When writing, think about what accessories your characters has and what they might say about that person.

By increasing your power of observation, you can learn a lot about a person, or at least come close to the truth. Use those refined people-watching skills to create fully-developed characters for your own stories.

Retelling Classic Novels and Fairytales

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Once upon a time, many years ago I watched a performance of Beauty and the Beast in a small theater-in-the-round. I was about nine or ten years old at the time, and I remember how I fell in love with Belle, her love of books and how she was first captured as a prisoner then fell in love with the Beast who was her captor. I didn’t know it then, but that portrayal of Beauty and the Beast was a modern retelling, and in fact, has been retold countless times over the years.

I had a similar experience when I read Wicked when the book was published. I remember being so intrigued by the premise, which retells the story of The Wizard of Oz from the witch’s perspective. I thought the reimagined premise was unique and compelling, and the story did not disappoint.  

There have been many retellings since, either in published book form, on the big screen, even on stage. And the retellings aren’t just based on fairy tales and folk tales. Classic novels have also been retold in countless ways, such Little Women and Pride and Prejudice. Here are a few I’ve come across:

*While Beauty Slept by Elizabeth Blackwell, part historical fiction and part retelling of the fairy tale Sleeping Beauty;

* Ella Enchanted by Gail Carson Levine, based on Cinderella. (And if you really want to be entertained, check out the silent film Ella Cinders, also a retelling starring Colleen Moore);

* The Court of Thorns and Roses by Sarah J. Maas, which adapts parts of Beauty and the Beast, the Norwegian folktale East of the Sun and West of the Moon, and the Scottish legend of Tam Lin.

* On stage, Chicago’s Joffrey Ballet performs a reimagined version of The Nutcracker set in Chicago in the late 1880s in the home of a migrant family that has come to work on the construction for the 1893 World’s Fair.

What makes these retellings so popular and compelling is in the way they bring familiar characters, settings and themes together with unique twists and turns that move the original story in directions we never imagined. It shows once again how one story can be told in different ways.  

How does one go about retelling a classic novel, fairy tale or folk tale without damaging the original intent of the story? How do you create something that’s unique and compelling without borrowing too heavily from the original text?

Annie Cardi, author of Red (based on The Scarlet Letter), writes in Writers Digest suggests that you begin by finding key aspects of the original story that call to you. Is there a character that is memorable? Is there a scene that stays with you? Use that aspect as the central piece to create an entirely new story. You don’t have to use every single element of the original either. If there’s part of the plot or a character that doesn’t work for you, leave it out.

Consider, too, how and why your version of the story needs to be told. Are you telling the story from a different character’s point of view, one that readers may not have considered, such as was done in Wicked? Or are you changing the setting to draw on different themes or to describe current social and cultural issues, such as the reimagined choreography for The Nutcracker?

The retelling should be somewhat recognizable to the original, either through a loose retelling or a close retelling, writes Hannah Kate Kelley on the Jane Friedman blog. In a loose retelling, the main plot diverts from the original story, but keeps many of the characters, events and themes. A good example of this is While Beauty Slept by Elizabeth Blackwell, which describes what really happens within the kingdom when Beauty is put to sleep — and why. On the other hand, a close retelling sticks close to the plot but changes out characters, events and even points of view.

Kelley also says that while retellings aren’t considered theft, they should be legally created. Make sure the work you are adapting isn’t violating copyright or intellectual property laws. Check the public domain (or Commons as it is called) to see if the creative work is listed, which means it is no longer protected under intellectual copyright laws. As long as no one owns the copyright, writers and creatives are free to adapt the piece and reproduce it in any way. That’s why folk tales and fairy tales are often used for retellings because no one owns the copyright to them.

Rules differ from country to country, however, so you’ll have to do your due diligence. In fact, before doing any writing, check the Commons to see if the work you want to retell is listed there.

If you do decide to tackle a retelling, Kelley offers several approaches to reimagining the story.

  • Tell the same story from a different existing character, or create a new character to tell the story.
  • Tell the story from the antagonist’s perspective and turn them into your new protagonist.
  • Provide a cultural lens to the retelling by exploring issues of race, class and gender.
  • Put the main characters in a new setting or era.
  • Switch up genres, like Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, which is retold as a horror story.

    Whether bringing a classic novel into the modern era or rewriting a fairy tale from a different character’s point of view, modern retellings and adaptations can open up creative new ways to tell your stories and entertain your readers.

For another look at how to craft a modern retelling, check out this interview with fantasy authors Sarah J. Maas and Heather Lyons.

Story Telling with a French Twist

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Ever since I took French in high school, I’ve been in love with the French culture. During those four years under two different teachers, I learned about France through its music, art, literature and food. I learned to love the French Impressionists artists, like Renoir, Cezanne and Monet. We listened to classic ballads by Edith Piaf and Charles Aznavour.  As a class, we read The Little Prince (or should I say Le Petit Prince) by Antoine De Saint-Exupery. En francais, of course.

My high school experience culminated in a trip to Paris my senior year with my French teacher and classmates. We visited Montmarte, where a young artist drew my portrait. We toured Notre Dame and the Louvre, and we visited several chateaus outside Paris. And of course, there was always the Eiffel Tower and the Arc de Triomph in the background wherever we went. It was a memorable time.

That French influence is still with me several decades later. As an adult, I gravitate toward stories that take place in Paris or have a French theme. Kristin Hannah’s The Nightingale and The Little Paris Bookshop by Nina George are among my favorites. Some of the classics like Gustav Flaubert’s Madame Bovary and The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupery (this time in English) aren’t so bad either.

With the Summer Olympics well underway in Paris, it seems fitting to devote this week’s post to the novels that have been inspired by that beautiful city. My lists only scratch the surface, however. There are hundreds of novels set in France, which you can find on Goodreads or at your local bookstore or library.

Without further ado, here are my book lists featuring the City of Lights.

Contemporary novels that I’ve read and recommend to my fellow readers::
The Nightingale by Kristin Hannah
The Little Paris Bookshop by Nina George
The Little French Bistro by Nina George
The Hundred-Foot Journey by Richard C. Marais
The Alice Network by Kate Quinn
Sarah’s Key by Tatiana de Rosnay

I’m currently reading Suite Francaise by Irene Nemirovsky, a French Jew who was captured by the Nazis and sent to Auschwitz, where she later died. This novel was hidden and unknown for 64 years.

Contemporary novels set in France that are either currently on my shelf or on my wish list:
All the Light We Cannot See – Anthony Doerr
The Paris Apartment – Lucy Foley
The Paris Orphan – Natasha Lester
A Caribbean Princess in Paris – Adriana Herrera

Of course, we cannot forget the classics:

Victor Hugo, Hunchback of Notre Dame and Les Miserables
Alexander Dumas, The Three Muskateers, The Count of Monte Cristo.
Jules Verne, Around the World in 80 Days, 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea.
Charles Perrault. You may not have heard his name, but you know his fairy tales—Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty, Puss in Boots and Little Red Riding Hood.
Gustav Flaubert. Madame Bovary
Beauty & the Beast originally written by Gabrielle Suzanne Barbot de Villeneuve.

(Forget the Disney version. In the original version, Belle has three brothers and two sisters. There’s no Gaston, no magic and no curses on the palace staff.  Still it is an enduring story. Check out this film version released in 2014.)

While France resonates so much with me, you might have your own city or country that you gravitate toward with your reading choices. London? Greece? Italy? Asia? What is your favorite city or country to read about?