Writing Advice from Agents and Published Authors

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It’s the dog days of summer, and I’ve gotten a bit lazy. The last thing I want to do this week is research and write a new and lengthy blog post.

Still, there is so much valuable insights and advice to share about the writing process. So this week, I’ve compiled some of the best tips from literary agents and published authors as they shared with the editors of Writers Digest magazine. After all, we can all use a little bit of help, no matter where we are in the writing process.

Enjoy! And have a safe holiday weekend.

Advice from published authors:

“….. write the thing that you feel urgently compelled to write. Write the thing that you feel drawn to write, and write it in a way that only you can do it and trust your instincts.
Brandon Taylor, author, The Late Americans

“There’s no need to plan everything out beforehand. Part of the fun is setting up high stakes without knowing the outcome. This way you’ll be right there with your protagonist, struggling to come up with solutions, even as the walls close in deliciously around you.”
Julia Bartz, novelist, The Writing Retreat

“But self-doubt is incredibly valuable. If you didn’t ever doubt yourself, you’d be a psychopath. Sometimes doubt is what helps me as a writer say, ‘This isn’t working right.’”
Chuck Wendig, author, Gentle Writing Advice: How to Be a Writer Without Destroying Yourself

“One thing I value about writing and publishing is that it’s not as ageist as some other industries. It’s hard to become a movie star maybe at 50…. It [publishing] is something you can break through at any time. There is room for reinvention, whether that means emotional reinvention, new opportunity, or just room for growth.”
Steven Rowley, author, The Guncle Abroad

“…find as many writer friends as you can because these are the people who will completely, 100 percent understand how difficult it is to break into publishing…Reach out and find your community.”
Jesse Q Sutano, author, Dial A for Aunties

“Understand that your book is a product that needs to garner broad support… Make sure you have a core group of diverse test readers who will give you honest feedback. It doesn’t mean they’re always right, but if half of our test readers think the beginning of your book is slow, you probably need to revise it.”
Pamela Samuels Young, author, Anybody’s Daughter

“…when people ask me my advice about these things, I say, write a novella, write a short story. Be wild and free and be able to accept failure by your own terms before you commit to spending three or four or five years on something that might fail.”
Ian McEwan, author, Atonement

“You need to give yourself permission to be bad when you are drafting… This is where you need to embrace the suck. Let yourself be bad. It’s okay. Everybody’s first drafts are bad. My first drafts are terrible, but once you have a bad first draft down, you can fix it. You can edit it, you can polish it up….”
Kate Quinn, author, The Diamond Eye

“There are so many things you can worry about when you’re writing that are all irrelevant… The important thing is a book that you write is your book and it’s you, and you put yourself into it and don’t listen to any of the interference from anywhere else in the world.”
Lisa Jewell, author, The Night She Disappeared

“I’m a big believer in being in a workshop or class, working with other writers, which is not to say to just take anybody’s advice. When you’re in a classroom or a seminar, it makes you write because you know you’re going to go there Thursday. It kind of forces you to do the work.”
Alice Hoffman, author, Practical Magic

“But the thing I always say to writers is that you never should forget the lame that made you want to write this. It is better to have a strangely proportioned beast that burns and is alive and stalks across the page than a perfection proportioned corpse on the page. That is what you run into the danger of. It’s possible from too much feedback [and] too much confusion that you wind up taking out whatever is at the heart of your work.”
Jean Kwok, author, Girl in Translation

“Find a way to make your writing process a discipline in the way that musicians practice their instrument.”
Tommy Orange, author, There There

“Characters live in the moments of quiet we often rush to yell over, so take some time to let them be heard.”
Mazey Eddings, author, A Brush with Love

“If you want to make a living as a writer, approach it like a business from the start. You wouldn’t open a corner store without a business plan—don’t just wing it for your author business!”
Jessie Kwak, author, Ghost Pirate Gambit

“The biggest thing is to read a lot so you can innately understand story structure. This even comes from watching movies and TV, and thinking about why it was great and what points did it hit and what aspects of it resonated with you….”
Alyssa Cole, author, One of Us Knows

Advice from literary agents:

“Share your work with multiple readers. Consider their feedback, especially their questions. Heed only the advice that resonates. Save a few readers for subsequent drafts so they can have fresh eyes to catch anything you or your regular readers might miss.”
Jennifer March Soloway, Andrea Brown Literary Agency

“As an agent, I want to fall under your spell. I want to read past my bedtime, be haunted by your work, be captivated, lifted, [and] spirited away by your story. If your work can deliver this magic, it makes me envision all of the opportunities we can conjure together to make the ultimate connection to the readers.”
Rachel Letofsky, CookeMcDermid Agnecy

“Remember you are interviewing the agent as much as (if not more than) they ae interviewing you. Bring a list of questions and don’t be afraid to ask tough ones.”
Kesia Lupo, The Bindery Agency.

“A rejection does not mean that your writing sucks. It simply means it’s not a good fit for that particular agent. You need to find your match, someone who clicks with your book in a unique way that’s not unlike dating.”
Rachel Beck, Liza Dawson Associates

“Know what kind of writer you are: a sprinter or a marathoner, and let yourself be that kind of writer. Don’t be afraid you’ll forget your great idea. If it’s a great idea, it’ll stick to your ribs no matter how much you try to shake it off.”
Liz Parker, Verve Talent and Literary

“The key to success is being delusional enough to think that what you write is necessary, but humble enough to listen to informed feedback.”
Michael W. Bourret, Dystel, Goderich & Bourret, LLC

“Remember that ideas are cheap! You are more than one project, and there is inspiration everywhere if you look for it.”
Molly Ketcheson, Wolfson Literary Agency

“Being able to say what your novel is about in one or two sentences really helps. It’s not a question about what ‘happens’ in a novel, but it’s a question about what the heart of the novel is.”
Catherine Cho, Paper Literary

“Writing should be fun. If you’re getting to a place where it’s not anymore, take a break and let yourself fall in love with your writing again.”
Saffron Dodd, Ash Literary

Cultivating the Power of Observation for Better Character Development

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I remember back when I was in college, I took a speech class my freshman year. It was one of my favorite classes, and I loved our teacher (though I forget her name now).

One morning early in the semester, the lecture was interrupted by a former student who rushed into the classroom in a rage. He got in the teacher’s face, wanting to know why she had given him a bad grade the previous semester. She did her best to calm him down. As she escorted him from the room, she promised to discuss the issue with him after class.

My classmates and I witnessed this brief and intense exchange with a mixture of curiosity and puzzlement. We didn’t know what to make of it.

Once the former student left the room, our instructor asked us to take out a piece of paper and pen (this was way before computers) . She proceeded to ask a series of questions: What color was the student’s shirt? What was his hair color? How tall was he? Was he wearing a hat? What kind of shoes was he wearing?

There were only about 10 questions, but her intention became clear. Were we paying attention to the details? Her point? In a crisis or when witnessing a dramatic event, like a public argument, most people focus on the words that are said and how they’re spoken rather than the finer details of someone’s appearance.

People love watching other people and the events in their lives, from a car crash to a heated argument between people. We can’t help but be sucked into the drama. But that doesn’t necessarily mean they’re very good at recalling details. Yet in writing and in life, it’s a valuable skill. Those powers of observation can be useful when you’re a witness to a crime or simply people watching at the beach. You never know when you might need to relay those details, whether for a police investigation or for writing a mystery or memoir.  

This practice is also helpful for writers when developing their characters from the inside out. It’s not just the physical characteristics to be aware of, but also their facial expressions and gestures, the way they move and their mindset and attitude. It can help you form the foundation of each character’s personality.  

When quietly observing people, there are six areas to focus on. Each one can help you develop multi-dimensional characters.

Physical attributes. This might be the easiest to make a note of when observing people, though not always. Pay attention to the basics. If you see someone interesting on the street, note things like height, weight, hair color, skin tone, eye color, whether they’re wearing eyeglasses or sunglasses. Do they have thick, bushy eyebrows, or are they plucked thin? Does the woman wear lipstick, and if so, what color?

Think about how your own characters might appear if another person was observing them. Think also about how their physical attributes can define who they are as characters.

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Clothing. Next, pay attention to how your observed subjects are dressed. Are they wearing a suit and tie or a dress, or more casually in jeans and a T-shirt? One indicates someone heading to a business meeting or a formal dinner, while the second person might be a student or someone going out to a movie. What kind of shoes are they wearing? Are they spiky high heels or casual flats? Do they wear glasses or contacts? Are they wearing a windbreaker or sweater? Is there head covered?

Think about how your own characters are dressed. Does their dress show who they are or what they do for a living? If your character loves music or attending concerts, for example, have them wear concert T-shirts of their favorite band. Are they an athlete? Have them wear athletic shoes and a baseball cap.  

Nonverbal cues. Think about facial expressions and hand gestures. When you observe people, do their eyebrows rise up on their forehead when they’re surprised? Do they talk with their hands, or do they lay still at their sides when they speak? Do they smile a lot, and does that smile reach their eyes? What do their hands look like? Are they rough and callused because they work outdoors, or are they smooth and polished as if they’ve never lifted a finger to do housework? Do they have other types of body behaviors, like constant blinking, twirling their hair, pursing their lips? These small movements can give you an idea about a character’s mindset in your own stories.

Body language and movement. When you study your subject, look at how they move their body. Are they seated or standing? Are they seated upright in rapt attention, or are they slouched or hunched over at their desk? Are they sitting back against their chair, or leaning forward as if to hear every word their companion is saying? Are their movements swift, or slow and careful? Do they limp, or walk slowly and gingerly as if their limbs ache? Or are they racing ahead as if they’re running late? You can tell a lot about a person’s age, health and mindset by paying attention to their body movements. Sometimes it says more about what’s on their minds than the words they say.

Behavior alone vs. with other people. People tend to behave differently when they’re alone than when they’re around other people. For example, at first glance, a young woman traveling alone with a furrowed brow might be worried about something in her personal life, like a doctor appointment or an exam at school. But the same young woman out to dinner with friends may be livelier and more engaged.

Similarly, people behave differently around different groups of people. A child might be quieter, more sullen at home around his overbearing parents, while at school he’s more animated around his classmates. When writing your characters, think about how they behave in different situations. Who are they with and how do they behave around those people? How do they behave when they’re alone?

Possessions/accessories. When you observe people, take note of any unusual possessions or accessories they have with them. Do they carry a briefcase, a purse, a shopping bag or a backpack? Any one of those things can tell you something about your character. Someone with a backpack could be going to a job, school, or the library. Are they carrying books inside that backpack, the manuscript they’re working on, or sheet music? Are they staring into their mobile phones as they walk down the street? Are they listening to music on headphones? What do the headphones look like, and what kind of music do you think they’re listening to? Are they wearing any jewelry? Are they checking their wristwatch? They might be running late for a meeting. Are they walking a dog? Perhaps they’re carrying a pet carrier with a small bird or cat inside. A person’s accessories can tell a lot about a person’s career, hobbies and interests. When writing, think about what accessories your characters has and what they might say about that person.

By increasing your power of observation, you can learn a lot about a person, or at least come close to the truth. Use those refined people-watching skills to create fully-developed characters for your own stories.

Retelling Classic Novels and Fairytales

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Once upon a time, many years ago I watched a performance of Beauty and the Beast in a small theater-in-the-round. I was about nine or ten years old at the time, and I remember how I fell in love with Belle, her love of books and how she was first captured as a prisoner then fell in love with the Beast who was her captor. I didn’t know it then, but that portrayal of Beauty and the Beast was a modern retelling, and in fact, has been retold countless times over the years.

I had a similar experience when I read Wicked when the book was published. I remember being so intrigued by the premise, which retells the story of The Wizard of Oz from the witch’s perspective. I thought the reimagined premise was unique and compelling, and the story did not disappoint.  

There have been many retellings since, either in published book form, on the big screen, even on stage. And the retellings aren’t just based on fairy tales and folk tales. Classic novels have also been retold in countless ways, such Little Women and Pride and Prejudice. Here are a few I’ve come across:

*While Beauty Slept by Elizabeth Blackwell, part historical fiction and part retelling of the fairy tale Sleeping Beauty;

* Ella Enchanted by Gail Carson Levine, based on Cinderella. (And if you really want to be entertained, check out the silent film Ella Cinders, also a retelling starring Colleen Moore);

* The Court of Thorns and Roses by Sarah J. Maas, which adapts parts of Beauty and the Beast, the Norwegian folktale East of the Sun and West of the Moon, and the Scottish legend of Tam Lin.

* On stage, Chicago’s Joffrey Ballet performs a reimagined version of The Nutcracker set in Chicago in the late 1880s in the home of a migrant family that has come to work on the construction for the 1893 World’s Fair.

What makes these retellings so popular and compelling is in the way they bring familiar characters, settings and themes together with unique twists and turns that move the original story in directions we never imagined. It shows once again how one story can be told in different ways.  

How does one go about retelling a classic novel, fairy tale or folk tale without damaging the original intent of the story? How do you create something that’s unique and compelling without borrowing too heavily from the original text?

Annie Cardi, author of Red (based on The Scarlet Letter), writes in Writers Digest suggests that you begin by finding key aspects of the original story that call to you. Is there a character that is memorable? Is there a scene that stays with you? Use that aspect as the central piece to create an entirely new story. You don’t have to use every single element of the original either. If there’s part of the plot or a character that doesn’t work for you, leave it out.

Consider, too, how and why your version of the story needs to be told. Are you telling the story from a different character’s point of view, one that readers may not have considered, such as was done in Wicked? Or are you changing the setting to draw on different themes or to describe current social and cultural issues, such as the reimagined choreography for The Nutcracker?

The retelling should be somewhat recognizable to the original, either through a loose retelling or a close retelling, writes Hannah Kate Kelley on the Jane Friedman blog. In a loose retelling, the main plot diverts from the original story, but keeps many of the characters, events and themes. A good example of this is While Beauty Slept by Elizabeth Blackwell, which describes what really happens within the kingdom when Beauty is put to sleep — and why. On the other hand, a close retelling sticks close to the plot but changes out characters, events and even points of view.

Kelley also says that while retellings aren’t considered theft, they should be legally created. Make sure the work you are adapting isn’t violating copyright or intellectual property laws. Check the public domain (or Commons as it is called) to see if the creative work is listed, which means it is no longer protected under intellectual copyright laws. As long as no one owns the copyright, writers and creatives are free to adapt the piece and reproduce it in any way. That’s why folk tales and fairy tales are often used for retellings because no one owns the copyright to them.

Rules differ from country to country, however, so you’ll have to do your due diligence. In fact, before doing any writing, check the Commons to see if the work you want to retell is listed there.

If you do decide to tackle a retelling, Kelley offers several approaches to reimagining the story.

  • Tell the same story from a different existing character, or create a new character to tell the story.
  • Tell the story from the antagonist’s perspective and turn them into your new protagonist.
  • Provide a cultural lens to the retelling by exploring issues of race, class and gender.
  • Put the main characters in a new setting or era.
  • Switch up genres, like Pride and Prejudice and Zombies, which is retold as a horror story.

    Whether bringing a classic novel into the modern era or rewriting a fairy tale from a different character’s point of view, modern retellings and adaptations can open up creative new ways to tell your stories and entertain your readers.

For another look at how to craft a modern retelling, check out this interview with fantasy authors Sarah J. Maas and Heather Lyons.

Story Telling with a French Twist

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Ever since I took French in high school, I’ve been in love with the French culture. During those four years under two different teachers, I learned about France through its music, art, literature and food. I learned to love the French Impressionists artists, like Renoir, Cezanne and Monet. We listened to classic ballads by Edith Piaf and Charles Aznavour.  As a class, we read The Little Prince (or should I say Le Petit Prince) by Antoine De Saint-Exupery. En francais, of course.

My high school experience culminated in a trip to Paris my senior year with my French teacher and classmates. We visited Montmarte, where a young artist drew my portrait. We toured Notre Dame and the Louvre, and we visited several chateaus outside Paris. And of course, there was always the Eiffel Tower and the Arc de Triomph in the background wherever we went. It was a memorable time.

That French influence is still with me several decades later. As an adult, I gravitate toward stories that take place in Paris or have a French theme. Kristin Hannah’s The Nightingale and The Little Paris Bookshop by Nina George are among my favorites. Some of the classics like Gustav Flaubert’s Madame Bovary and The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupery (this time in English) aren’t so bad either.

With the Summer Olympics well underway in Paris, it seems fitting to devote this week’s post to the novels that have been inspired by that beautiful city. My lists only scratch the surface, however. There are hundreds of novels set in France, which you can find on Goodreads or at your local bookstore or library.

Without further ado, here are my book lists featuring the City of Lights.

Contemporary novels that I’ve read and recommend to my fellow readers::
The Nightingale by Kristin Hannah
The Little Paris Bookshop by Nina George
The Little French Bistro by Nina George
The Hundred-Foot Journey by Richard C. Marais
The Alice Network by Kate Quinn
Sarah’s Key by Tatiana de Rosnay

I’m currently reading Suite Francaise by Irene Nemirovsky, a French Jew who was captured by the Nazis and sent to Auschwitz, where she later died. This novel was hidden and unknown for 64 years.

Contemporary novels set in France that are either currently on my shelf or on my wish list:
All the Light We Cannot See – Anthony Doerr
The Paris Apartment – Lucy Foley
The Paris Orphan – Natasha Lester
A Caribbean Princess in Paris – Adriana Herrera

Of course, we cannot forget the classics:

Victor Hugo, Hunchback of Notre Dame and Les Miserables
Alexander Dumas, The Three Muskateers, The Count of Monte Cristo.
Jules Verne, Around the World in 80 Days, 20,000 Leagues Under the Sea.
Charles Perrault. You may not have heard his name, but you know his fairy tales—Cinderella, Sleeping Beauty, Puss in Boots and Little Red Riding Hood.
Gustav Flaubert. Madame Bovary
Beauty & the Beast originally written by Gabrielle Suzanne Barbot de Villeneuve.

(Forget the Disney version. In the original version, Belle has three brothers and two sisters. There’s no Gaston, no magic and no curses on the palace staff.  Still it is an enduring story. Check out this film version released in 2014.)

While France resonates so much with me, you might have your own city or country that you gravitate toward with your reading choices. London? Greece? Italy? Asia? What is your favorite city or country to read about?